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My name is Michale, who is a volunteer of the youth hostel. I enjoy traveling very much. As we know, it is popular to help others for free when you are travelling in the International. Meanwhile, it is also welcome to make volunteer travel in Africa. There are a lot of advantages. For instance, the free accommodation not only can save money, but also help us understand the special culture. It is worth doing it. However, it also has its own disadvantages. The condition of the living is not great. Due to the strange of the place, we may lose a sense of safeness. In my opinions, we should do more volunteer travels. Excises as we need, we should do more change to train ourselves. When we help others, we can also learn much form it. So come to join us!