Is there anything wrong with my rap song?
I knew this would happen. Hey stop clappin'.
This is not so joyful, instead this is really hurtful.
Hey, I wanna tell you a story, but this is not my victory.
I was in a freakin' rush, I thought I had a crush.
It's a love-at-a-first-sight moment, but life would've shown it.
I really liked this real cute boy, it was a great joy.
But I wish I would've regret that,like I'm gettin' back my cherry hat.
When I found out that he didn't like me, I was where I wasn't supposed to be.
It wasn't glad, I was so sad.
Do you know why? I just can't, I'll cry.
I haven't loved anyone since 2nd Grade, Hey, I'll take a glass of lemonade.
But if I think about it, I'm not sure, my tears will pour.
Details: I know. I am trying to move on (Of course). Tell me what you think about this rap song. I just wanted to share it. It was about my crush that he didn't like me. I hope Everyone liked it. I also wanted to show how deep I felt about this. I am moving on, but I still got the heart-broken feeling. Just tell me, What do you think? and Are there any mistakes?. I added pizzazz and entertainment to my song so that You all can enjoy it. I might make this my official song. Thank You.