Is this poem good? (in description)
Last night at 12:00 sharp,
came down angels playing the harp.
God said "I have something for you, it's a gift"
then said "get on my back, I'll give you a lift".
Soaring through the dark black sky,
we found his kingdom, shiny white.
As he opened those shiny doors,
I knew it was a place I wanted to explore.
That was when God put a baby girl in my hands,
"She's so beautiful!" I said. "Shes so grand"!
It's the best thing I ever got,
besides my good life and my yacht
The poem is called Gods gift and I wrote this by myself. I want to read it at an open mic night. Tell me if I should!