Am I a good writer?
I know I did this question already, but I forgot to write the story. :) (I'm 14)
I take the loaf of bread out of the oven, and lay it on a cooling rack. The sunlight is streaming in through the window grabbing at the china untill it fairly winked back. It's warming the stone floor to a golden brown. A bush of lilacs are peeping in at an open window filling the room with its fragrance. A gentle breeze is in carrying a robins song. The sound of the timer announcing that another loaf is done reaches my ears.
Ps any details showing how I can improve will help! Thanks in advance!!!