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MinooF: 9 months ago

Dear English native speakers,could you edit these lines for me(No. 2),plz?

And also removing mistakes?The Moon as the first story of the trilogy,was nominated for an Edgar Award, for the Best Mystery of the Year 2009.

2)"It also along with the last two novellas , entitled The Room ,and The Country ,which come together in a book called The ..... won Prix France Culture de Littérature Étrangère. "

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schmeila: 9 months ago

The correct way of writing the second sentence would be "It, along with the last two novellas entitled The Room and The Country, which come together in a book called The..., won Prix France Culture de Litt?rature ?trang?re." The phrase that is in between the comma can be done away with and the sentence would still have meaning. The phrase was put there in order to give additional information.

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MinooF: 9 months ago

Dear schmeila,hi.Thanks for yr reply.I find it useful.Thank u so much :)

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