How does the beginning of my short story sound?
This is it. "I want to spend the rest of my life with him," Stella thought. They were looking up at the stars contemplating the future. "It?s amazing," She said. "What is?" "The universe." "No one knows what's out there." "I suppose" "How are you not cold?" "I have no clue." "I'm freezing, can we go inside?" "Look!" "Whoa cool! A shooting star! Did you make a wish?" "Yes, did you?" ?Hold on let me think. . . Got it!" "What did you wish for?" ?I can?t tell you or else it won?t come true!" "Not necessarily! If I guess it then it will still come true right?" "I don?t want to risk it. . ." "Why not?" "I just really want it to come true." "Can you at least tell me what it is about?" "Sure if you guess it right I promise I will tell you!" "Okay, knowing you it is probably about a guy . . . and you would never think about the past, so I'm guessing that it about a guy that you want to have a future with. . ." "Dang! Yes . . . Now you just have to guess who. . .? I want to write a love story and it needs to be 3-5 typed pages. What should I make the climax? Any help would be much appreciated!