What do you think of my story's intro?
It takes place after Blake (she's a girl) is busted for everything she's done:
Two hours of detention can feel like an eternity in hell especially if you did all the shit I’d done in the past couple of mouths. I’m surprised I only ended up in detention and not behind bars. I broke quite a handful of rules and took a hell of a lot of chances for my ass to be spared so easily. I’m sure there’s more to come my way. I just hope my mistakes don’t come back to bite me in the face. Lord would only know what will happen to me and anyone who dared to stand by me. I stared up at the clock that was above the classroom door. If only I could walk out that door and go back to the night where all this crap began. That one mistake I hate to regret would no longer haunt me. Instead, it would be like nothing ever happened.