start if off in slow motion, after she lands,
"Floating. That's what if felt like. Something was wrong, I kept trying to open my eyes, I couldn't tell. AH! I suddenly became aware of burning, an ache covered my body which felt suspended in some surreal hell. I opened my eyes, and they burned. My ears rang with a reverberating thunder. "Oh my God! Oh my, oh my God!" A voice, distorted, but audible screamed, a shriek which made my soul cringe . I struggled to move my arm, electrifying pain coursed through me, contorting my body. I forced a moan as I opened my eyes slowly. Glass. There was glass every where. Forcing myself to come to my senses, i was overwhelmed with agonizing fiery pain. "Ava!" I heard someone yell. "God, oh my god," I could hear Chris chanting. I moved my head, it was in a puddle of something. Rain? I don't remember it raining? "Somebody help! Call 9-1-1! Help!" My head hit the ground, and then everything went dark. So so dark."

Minji: 4 months ago via iPhone

Daebak, Zaren! Just Daebak! That made me think about my car accident a couple years ago. Such a good writer....

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bonjourmyfriends: 4 months ago

That was amazing thank you (:

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You could write something like..." Before I knew it my body was thrown like a rag doll through the wind shield. I can see the car far away, the others are crawling out the car. Oh, God I can't see out of my right eye is that....blood? They're screaming at me...I can't understand their words....I feel dizzy, is this the end? Is this how my short life will end..? I can feel the blood dripping out....God, is this how we meet...?" Something like that, I'm not very good at writing :P Good luck!

Well being in a car crash in real life and surviving, the first that happen was that everything went mute and my world seem to have slowed down. I couldn't hear my mom screaming or brother calling my name. I saw was a glass shards flying across as the force of the crash pushed me from one side of the back row seat to another. I was hospitalize for three months and had a mild case of amnesia. But now I'm better, so you could use my experience

All I heard was a loud bang. I saw myself getting closer and closer to the windshield. I felt my body being propelled onto the road. I was in extreme pain, I couldn't move. I couldn't talk. All I heard was the loud screaming of my 4 friends and Chris. AHHHHH! AVA!!!!! CHRIS AN AMBULANCE!, screamed one of my friends. SHE'S DYING!, screamed another. I heard a loud brake noise and a car disappearing into the darkness. He or she was gone. I was going to die. Here. On this very road. Because of some random person. I didn't hear Chris for some reason. I felt cuts. I was in some kind of puddle. Blood. That red liquid, somewhat thicker than water. I was going to die. No kids. No husband. No life. No nothing. I am dying. And I can't do anything about it. I will die. I wish I could've said my final goodbyes. All
my family. They don't even know I'm dying right here, right now. I should've stayed at home. When death calls you can't get in or out. You die or you don't. And it seems like I'm going to die. Death was a funny thing to me, not anymore.
Chris' POV: My fianc she is going to die. I can't do or say anything she's dying. I'm frozen. As still as anything. She will die. I will be alone. She can't leave me not now. Not ever.

Minji: 4 months ago via iPhone

Daebak Sandra. Really good writer! :P

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