I need some opinions on the first bit of my new book (part 2)
I exclaimed. I stomped up the stairs and made my way for the exit. As I reached the door, I realized the fog had cleared from the ground. “Probably some breeze came through,” I thought aloud. When I opened the door, I couldn’t believe what I saw. In fact, I could barely see at all. I shielded my eyes from the bright light outside. As soon as I was able to see clearly, I realized why I couldn’t see anything at first. The world was now colorful. Suddenly, the house behind me changed, now it had become a mobile trailer. “Ok, what’s going on here?” I walked in the direction my house was in, or so I thought. I was in disbelief on the way though, because I couldn’t grasp the fact that there were talking babies in adult clothes and doing things adults would do. Suddenly, I realized I had changed as well.