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Hey everybody, this is my newest poem, i wrote it yesterday, what do y'all think?

A Falling angel, Shattered earth
No one seeing your true worth
Calling out in agony, your heart screams its pain
And upon your life it leaves its stain
I can’t believe you have the nerve
To say that this is what you deserve
To get broken over and over
Torn apart, smashed, beaten down, and lowered
Far beneath what you truly are
When the truth is that you belong in the stars

Is it worth it, to live a lie?
To tell yourself everything is fine
When sizzling and burning beneath the surface
Is an inferno of sorrow that makes you feel worthless
Is it worth it, when every night you cry?
With no one to stand there by your side
Who will dry your eyes, erase your tears
And fight away, all your fears

How long can you continue the life that you live?
This life where all you do is give
Yet never receive a reward for your efforts
But instead are treated like a modern day leper
In case you haven’t gotten the clue
It’s high time you received your due
Someone who sees your true worth
And gives you the love that you deserve
Is the only treatment befitting
Of The angel who roams the earth

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It's amazing! You should put some music to it and make it into a song! Then you could sing it, with your awesome voice :P

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i'm actually working on doing that with a few of my poems
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Good luck :-)
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thanks
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No problem
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okay, i made it into a song, once i can copyright the lyrics so nobody can steal them, then i will definitly sing it on my youtube channel
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Awesome! I'll be sure to listen to it :)
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asha22

nice poem about life.

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I liked it(:

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It's awesome!!

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Amazing ^0^!!!!

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Beautiful! ;)

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Like it; hope one day you'll find that which will make you truly feel that you ARE a star.

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Your poem is really lovely. I agree with OrlandoLover, this would be a fantastic song. Keep doing what you're doing :)

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Wow ! You really have talent, you need to keep on this!

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thanks
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Good luck
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I love it!

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awesome!
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Beyond amazing. I love it.

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Goooooooood it wassssssss awwweeesssoooommmeeeee btw I'm in a massage chair lol

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But it was a little long
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its amazing baby i love it :) <3

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ares15

I'm not into poetry, but I could just not stop reading that one. It was absolutly amazing. I loved it

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you. just. made. me. CRY! but in a extremely good way! as I've said before, you could do amazing things with this talent!

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thanks
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