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IvettelovesYou98:
3 months ago
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Last edited at 10:04PM on 3/10/2013
oh my, it's beautiful! we are learning petry in english and all those Emily Dickinson poems aren't as captivating as yours. great job :)
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
wow, thank you!
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coolspot:
3 months ago
sing a song of joy without fear, why would you be afraid too sing happy music?
its good better than anything I could come up with.
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
it's a euphemism, a metaphor. The song of joy is my opening up to the world, my ability to trust someone without the fear that they will leave me behind in the dust, The fear is self explanatory, my fear of opening up my walls because i don't wish to be hurt anymore.
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answermyquestion123:
3 months ago
Omg that's amazing I wish all guys were like you !
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
Don't wish that, it would take all the magic out of guys like me, and then there wouldn't be any good guys at all. The thing about being a nice guy is i am different from all the bad guys, just search in a good pool and you find the guys worth your time.
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ms_shoulders:
3 months ago
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I think you have yourself a real opportunity to make this a song. It's really good and meaningful.
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
lol, i actually sing too, so that's a legitimate possibilty, thanks for the suggestion, i'll work on it.
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ms_shoulders:
3 months ago
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Awesome! Good luck. And you're welcome
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xXRockstarGirlXx:
3 months ago
That's pretty AWESOME... i mean i love it personally!
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Young_and_Innocent:
3 months ago
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wow, u r really good at it, I read it a million times :)
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Young_and_Innocent:
3 months ago
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how much time do u need to finish a poem? < just curious :)
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
if i get a good inspiration or its a good topic, i can usually write one in ten minutes or so if it's fairly short like this one.
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Young_and_Innocent:
3 months ago
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amazing, I'd take 10 months not 10 minutes :D
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
All it takes is a little bit of inspiration really, and then the words just come to me.
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Young_and_Innocent:
3 months ago
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best wishes :) & thanks 4 the info.
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CaptainThorLoki:
3 months ago
You should make it into a song. Ive seen a couple of your youtube videos, and it would be a really good song. You are a great singer, btw.
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
thank you, i appreciate the complement, and will probably try and make this a song.
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CaptainThorLoki:
3 months ago
You should do it. And tell me if you do so I can watch it on youtube
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bUlLeTpRoOfLoVe:
3 months ago
It's really good.That has many feelings in it.These kind of poems are hard to find.I liked it :)
Keep writing more.Don't feel discouraged if someone said something bad but try to learn from it :)
Not showingof or advertising or anything ..but here's one mine ..
Tell me how it is
My mommy's so stupid
She eats ice-cream without a spoon
She wishes without a boon
All I asked her was a cat ..
'I want Brown Classic Tabby Maine Coon'
'What is it?''she had asked
I had said It's a cat with brown hairs and yellow eyes'
''No'' was her reply which made me mad
I stomped my foot and refused to eat
Until she bought me a Brown Maine Coon;
''Once a no,always a no'' she had yelled
''I want it.I want it.I want it.'' was my short comeback
Following my hunger strike, I didn't eat the whole day,
When my dad came home he said ''I eat my dinner right away.''
So I ate and then I asked
"I want Brown Classic Tabby Maine Coon!''
''You will no let it go,will you?'' was her tired reply.
I smiled at her showing all my teeth
Which had turned yellow for I had forget to clean.
Mummy screamed ''Go brush your teeth!''
''Will you then buy me a Brown Classic Tabby....'
''Of course of course now clean your teeth.'
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
interesting, i find that to be quite close to some of Shel Silversteins work, built on a lighter type of topic. Good work.
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bUlLeTpRoOfLoVe:
3 months ago
And btw I just ran through your profile...U should not worry so much..
Everyone is like you as much as clueless as u are.Don't be afraid cos u might just have those answers infront of you ...just focus on the present and before you know it life will teach u everything.
Everyone is like you as much as clueless as u are.Don't be afraid cos u might just have those answers infront of you ...just focus on the present and before you know it life will teach u everything.
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pratikagarwal:
3 months ago
oh my, it's beautiful! we are learning petry in english and all those Emily Dickinson poems aren't as captivating as yours. great job
sing a song of joy without fear, why would you be afraid too sing happy music?
its good better than anything I could come up with
Omg that's amazing I wish all guys were like you
Really nice
wow preppy thats really good
That's nice!
I think you have yourself a real opportunity to make this a song. It's really good and meaningful
That's pretty AWESOME... i mean i love it personally!
wow, u r really good at it, I read it a million times :)
You should make it into a song. Ive seen a couple of your youtube videos, and it would be a really good song. You are a great singer, btw.
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101DreamGirl101:
3 months ago
Omigod.....that is really REALLY REALLY beautiful
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aeropastle:
3 months ago
It's BEAUTIFUL! I LOVE your poetry! Have you ever told anyone (Besides us) about this? You could make some serious money, or at least become one of the great poets! (BTW, I like Greek mythology. Can you write something about that?)
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
Absolutely, here you go
Cronos, the master and lord of time
ate all his children, to prevent the fulfillment of a sign
saying that he would be deposed by his heir
that a new master would come, and ascend his royal chair
as the children came out, he ate them up
Hades, Demeter, but they weren't enough
he had soon devoured both Poseidon and Hera
until finally Cronos, had achieved a reign of terror
But Rhea was destined to have one more child
powerful and free, always roaming wild
a boy named Zeus came forth from the womb
and with a stone he evaded Cronos,
who's stomach was to be his tomb
Zeus was sent to the island of Crete`
where he grew up, and finally seeing
the disaster which his father had wrought
he realized that there was a war to be fought
he gave Cronos a foul potion
and he disgourged his children in a flood like the ocean
The war of the titans, as it came to be called
lasted ten years, before Zeus made the strike to end it all
Cronos was cast into Tartarus
where his screams of vengeance can be heard far down below us
and upon high does his son reign
a powerful ruler, the sky emblazoned with his name.
Cronos, the master and lord of time
ate all his children, to prevent the fulfillment of a sign
saying that he would be deposed by his heir
that a new master would come, and ascend his royal chair
as the children came out, he ate them up
Hades, Demeter, but they weren't enough
he had soon devoured both Poseidon and Hera
until finally Cronos, had achieved a reign of terror
But Rhea was destined to have one more child
powerful and free, always roaming wild
a boy named Zeus came forth from the womb
and with a stone he evaded Cronos,
who's stomach was to be his tomb
Zeus was sent to the island of Crete`
where he grew up, and finally seeing
the disaster which his father had wrought
he realized that there was a war to be fought
he gave Cronos a foul potion
and he disgourged his children in a flood like the ocean
The war of the titans, as it came to be called
lasted ten years, before Zeus made the strike to end it all
Cronos was cast into Tartarus
where his screams of vengeance can be heard far down below us
and upon high does his son reign
a powerful ruler, the sky emblazoned with his name.
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aeropastle:
3 months ago
You're SO SWEET!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!! You are the BEST, preppyboy!!!!!!!!!
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aeropastle:
3 months ago
And you are HOW old? To right stuff like this?!?! You are truly amazing!
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
I'm 15, I turn 16 in July. I'm really not that amazing though.
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aeropastle:
3 months ago
via Android
Yes, you ARE. Don't be so hard on yourself. Most people don't even have the guts to show their talents to the world. But you did, and still do. You are a truly magnificent person.
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aeropastle:
3 months ago
via Android
Yeah. You are. And even though I've probably already stated this, just keep on trying to be your very best- don't let anyone tell you different. That's the only way to make it in this world.
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aeropastle:
3 months ago
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Well......that's enough of this "heartfelt" situation....... What's up?
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
haha, alright, I won't.
As to what's up, the sky, planes, planets, hot air, many hings are "up" today, even that hobo on the street who got high is rather "up"
In all seriousness though, not a whole lot, my day was pretty boring.
As to what's up, the sky, planes, planets, hot air, many hings are "up" today, even that hobo on the street who got high is rather "up"
In all seriousness though, not a whole lot, my day was pretty boring.
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aeropastle:
3 months ago
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We, my morning is pretty dull.
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
haha, I've found that life is usually pretty unexciting, and if it gets exciting, there is usually cause for worry.
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aeropastle:
2 months ago
I guess you're right. And I usually worry a lot, so excitement might not be my thing.
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aeropastle:
2 months ago
Hold up, I take that back, so don't think I'm a square or anything. I just like to chill and do my own thing sometimes.
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preppyboy:
2 months ago
yeah, I love racing on rollerblades, speed and agility drills are awesome.
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aeropastle:
2 months ago
I know, right! I just feel like I'm flying sometimes. I also like go-kart racing. I won on my first race. I'm a fool for anything with wheels involved.
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preppyboy:
2 months ago
haha, I've actually never been go-kart racing, but you're all about wheels, like I am about martial arts and bladed weapons. I love training in martial arts and weapons technique, it's so much fun.
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aeropastle:
2 months ago
It sounds awesome. What color is your belt? (If you have one.)
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aeropastle:
2 months ago
I didn't mean "If you have one" like that. I meant , do they do the belt thing, like black belts are the highest rank or something.
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preppyboy:
2 months ago
I have a yellow belt in a martial art called wing-jitsu (second belt, one above white), but I quit, because I could have easily annihilated my teacher in a sparring match, and he really didn't respect that. However, I am self trained (I actually taught myself), Judo, Jujitsu, Combat Tai Chi, Kung Fu, sword technique, some Muay Thai and some street fighting methods I developed on my own. I took and mixed all of them into my own style of martial arts, and I have beaten third degree black belts with it, and that was two years ago, so I would assume my actual level is far above even a 5th degree black belt in most arts. A belt holds up your pants, I really don't worry about it, so long as I can hold my own against those who call themselves masters, then I am happy with my accomplishments.
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aeropastle:
2 months ago
You're welcome! If you can do that.....well I just don't wanna fight you. ;)
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preppyboy:
2 months ago
lol, I don't fight girls, even if one tried to kill me I wouldn't hurt them. It's against my principles of chivalry.
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aeropastle:
2 months ago
So respectful...Is there anything you ARE'NT good at?
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preppyboy:
2 months ago
yes, I suck at math, am actually a total @sshole when i'm angry, and even when i'm not, I can still just annoy the crap out of people being a smart@ss, Cuss like a drunk sailor ( I learned from my marine corps parents), and I can be arrogant sometimes. Etc. My list of vices is far longer than the one of virtues. I think the only upside is that I managed to get the best virtues possible. So It isn't quite so bad.
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aeropastle:
2 months ago
lol, me too (The math thing). I can act b!tchy when I don't get my way sometimes, I just try to control it. If I couldn't control it, I wouldn't be alive today. -____-
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preppyboy:
2 months ago
hahaha, well, that means you make headway. Self control is the key to success in this world.
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aeropastle:
2 months ago
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So...... What's up (Besides the birds and planes and hot air. And that hobo.)
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preppyboy:
2 months ago
haha, not much, I've been doing a lot more singing lately, which is always fun :)
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aeropastle:
2 months ago
via Android
Singing....AWESOME! Are you still going to turn that poem into a song? ;)
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preppyboy:
2 months ago
working on it, in the meantime, I've been doing a lot with my youtube channel, which I do a lot of covers on.
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preppyboy:
2 months ago
oh, its a youtube channel I do covers on, just search preppyboy97 or Bob Fitzpatrick in the youtube search bar and some of my videos should come up.
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preppyboy:
2 months ago
I'm good, finally not sick anymore. What about you?
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australis:
3 months ago
very nice preppy.Is it yours?If yes,how about writing some music for it?
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
yes, I wrote this poem, and all the other ones I have asked about. And yeah, i'm trying to transpose it into a song.
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australis:
3 months ago
Where can I find some of the others to read?My profile says I've been a member from July 2012 but I've only been on the site for 2 weeks.So I really don't know much about using it.
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sunny279:
3 months ago
i <3 it itz beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
i'm really not that good looking, I don't get why some people think I am. lol
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
awesome, sounds like that will be pretty awesome
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
well, there's an easy way to fix that problem, either duct tape them to the ceiling or set them all up on blind dates 30 miles away for the entire day so they can't.
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
oh, that sucks, I hate it when my train of thought is derailed, it's so annoying.
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
so do you think you can try and remember what you were going to say?
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
lol okay, guess catching lost trains can be pretty hard.
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
so what do you like to do in your free time?
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
oh cool, that sounds like a lot of fun, I've never ridden a horse.
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
um, Idk, if you want to know anything about me then I can answer questions for you
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preppyboy:
3 months ago
surprising though, because if that's actually your picture, you could be one.
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preppyboy:
2 months ago
still cool though, I haven't met a whole lot of girls who actually work out enough to get abs.
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preppyboy:
2 months ago
sounds like it, I pretty much just use martial arts, I guess the two are probably a bit similar, like movement wise and such.
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musicluv123:
2 months ago
Amazing, Just like yourself :)
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Orangefav101:
29 days ago
It's so lovely.*cries*
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preppyboy:
29 days ago
while i'm sad that I made you cry (I try not to do that to girls), I appreciate the complement :)
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preppyboy:
28 days ago
In the future, I think I'll try to not make you cry :)
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spitzboo2:
28 days ago
The hope and love found in your poem are palatable !
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