Do you think this poems good?
Taking one look into the endless Wonderland
I take a deep breath and jump.
I swim for what seemed like days, weeks.
Squinting in the salty water, I see nothing,
nothing but dark waters around me.
Panic shoots me in the stomach and
pain strikes me in the chest.
But I keep going.
That's all I have so far its for a school project. Is Kt good?? How should I end it?