My poems finally finished is it good?
Taking one glance into the endless ocean,
I take a deep breath and jump.
I swim for what seems like days, weeks.
But I never seem to move anywhere.
Squinting in the salty water I find nothing.
nothing but dark water around me.
Panic shoots me in the stomach and
Pain strikes me in the chest.
But I keep going.
I fight the waves taking me farther away but
Then I just float.
The pain begins to subside and I feel peaceful.
But I can't leave this way.
I turn and swim towards the light.
Breaking through and gulping the fresh air
I finally reach the shore.