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Job satisfaction plays a significant role in modern life, when most adults complaint about they are unhappy with current job, which brings a lots of stress to their normal life and affect them to be well-being.

Obviously, low job satisfaction may results in other problems, such as family problem, workplace issue, even a serious social problem. Thus, to find out the factors which contribute to job satisfaction, is necessary and useful. There are some factors following I assumed will build a high job satisfaction.

To start with, salary is the most important part, which affects to how good the job satisfaction can be in directly and indirectly way. A good salary can not only make employee think the hard works they did are paid off, but also they believe they are useful and important to employer. And better living standard helps employees to release their stress quickly and effectively, but a good living standard has to be ensured by a relatively high salary.

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The essay has a lot of grammatical errors, like the first two sentences should read "Job satisfaction plays a significant role in modern life. However, most adults complain about being unhappy with their current job". You can use http://www.grammarly.com/ to check other grammatical errors.

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... complaint about their unhappiness with their current jobs, which brings a lot of stress to their normal... and affects their well-being.

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