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A choir of angels perched up high, dazed by searing waves of light
their moonlit feathers scorched black as they toppled from the sky.
they blazed through the night as radiant beams of red and blue
as were the haunting visions of a boy that spent his twilight stricken by the moon.

As the doves flew in with their golden tint bleeding through this silenced night
each feather singed by that cruel light now floats in daytime's sea
but all which swam and sung, in much delight, now rains,
and smites, in burning fury, all who wished and lived ungratefully.

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I really like it. It gives much visual representation, it has flow, it gives a story and a line of thought for the reader to travel with, and the words bring color to the mind and the beat brings rhythm to the heart. It is good. Make sure you get it copyrighted.

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Hey Sincerity. I hope your daughter is doing well. Take care of yourself too.
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ohh wow thats good

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That was great

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Kind of lengthly as on & on

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That was extrememly cool!!! wow,I'm going to read it again.

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you wrote that?!! ^^

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Excellent visualization !!

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