Submit a question to our community and get an answer from real people.
Submit

Any ideas for my novel?

im trying to write a novel about 2 girls that get stranded on an island (i already got how they got stranded) but i need more of a story than that. any ideas?

Report as

give them something crazy, like one is going crazy and keeps seeing a dude, but everytime she goes after him, he disappears, and at the end we find out she's crazy and then they get rescued and then the other girl sees the dude right before boarding the ship...make the first crazy girl get all violent when the other girl doesn't believe her or something and starts attacking until she has like a moment of truth, also if you want to REALLY get interesting, have her going around without knowing sabotage their food and shelter and water, and such, kind of like Johnny Depp in The Secret Window (great movie!!!!) make scenes like wild boars attacking them, or a fire and crazy girl thinks it was the dude, before the sane girl doesn't believe crazy chick, and it goes unsolved. Be sure to make it seem like the crazy girl did it all and THEN show the dude to the sane chick....it would be a good ending.....Good luck and hope I helped!!!

Helpful (1) Fun (1) Thanks for voting Comments (1)
Report as
lol this is good
Report as
Add a comment...

Go all Pirates of the Caribbean on the story.

Helpful (1) Fun (1) Thanks for voting Comments (0)
Report as
Add a comment...

it needs a good or bad turn for the worst or the better.

Helpful Fun Thanks for voting Comments (0)
Report as
Add a comment...

There is a unicorn on the island. And it tells them about a secret passage located on the island that leads to the center of the earth. The unicorn tells them about the treasure at the end of the passage. The girls go to the entrance and walk in, only to fall to their deaths. The unicorn later collects their bodies and quaters them into pieces. Then his jaw unhinges like a snake and he devours the two girls bodies. The end.

Helpful Fun Thanks for voting Comments (16)
Report as
wtf is wrong with you? i said i wanted a novel not a five-page story for deranged children
Report as
WHY ARE ALL MY COMMENTS TO "COLORFUL" FOR ASK? WHAT D1D i DO TO DESERVE THIS???
Report as
sorry i didnt mean to offend you your answer was actually pretty funny, but it was too short and kinda... yeah sorry
Report as
Man you wouldnt know literature if it bit you in the a$$. good day to you sir.
Report as
well soRRY!!!
Report as
Well, Mr. Krabbypatties sir, I believe you are being excessively rude to the asker, if we were to guide him, mabye he could learn to have ideas as....colorful as yours. He is most likely new to writing and lacks proper motivation, lets guide him and not insult him. also unicorns don't eat girls, they eat dogs...I can see how you mixed up...TWOnicrons eat people....not UNIcorns another name for a twonicorn is a bicorn not to be ixed with a BI-corn which is completely different and irrelevent, but I digress, let's be a little more forgiving, for his sake.
Report as
lol im a girl btw
Report as
I suppose you have a point bird.
Report as
Thank you, also now that we know that PieFweak is a lady, we must treat her as such, with dignety and respect....by hitting on her until she
A gets annoyed and leaves
B gives in and goes out with one of us or
C find out she is to young for either of us...
Report as
im 14, so i bet im too young for either of you 2. besides i already have a boyfriend and if i didnt i dont even know either of you in person
Report as
besides of you keep hitting on me ill report you
Report as
I was kidding, and no, you are not, I'm barely 15, my b-day is 3/3/98, so.....I believe you lost the bet, ma'am,also in case you did not realize, you are a peace of pie, with what looks like googly eyes, while you look delicious, I try to date women who are not living pastries....
Report as
If it wouldn't offend you, I would like to follow you, you seem funny and besides twilight, we have several common interests, such as anime and manga, if you decline I understand.
Report as
ok sure. ill follow you too, you're really entertaining to talk to.
Report as
and for a 15 year old you sure do talk a lot like a grown up. O_o
Report as
I try to type in at a more challenging level and use more complex words in order to type better/ faster and it never hurts to know a few more words, plus with more words, if you forget a few, you have synonyms to rely on in order to reword the statement without an awkward pause.
Report as
Add a comment...
Do you have an answer?
Answer this question...
Did you mean?
Login or Join the Community to answer
Popular Searches