Need help with lyrics.
I already asked this once already, but i forgot to add a few details. Im trying to write this song for a girl i like named Hannah. She is crazy and loves most of the same things as me. I have liked her for about 2 yrs now and im just really shy and awkward around her. Right now im not to worried about the sound of it. Here are my current lyrics: "I feel invisible to her. Why can't she see how much i care for her. Even when she looks at me, she looks right past me." Im planning on it being a romantic post-hardcore song. Let me know what you think and if anybody has any suggestions about adding, deleting, or changing some part, it would be appreciated.