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Can you please help me improve this poem?

What can I add or take out to make this better?(thanks!)
Horses are like angles
Sent from above
To help me on my journey
Of life, and many troubles

They Comfort me like a pillow,
When I need a soft hug,
Or something to cuddle that is
Warm and relaxing

Horses are like a diary
I can tell them what I need
Or what I want
With out fearing they
Might tell someone else.

They are always there for me
Like a friend
And when I need a strong tower
To lean on, to cry on,
They are always there
for me

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I was going to make fun of it, not because it's bad, but I was going to have fun, but then I realized you're one of my followers, so it's great.

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haha...? Umm... lol
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thanks btw
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try happy and love

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Where?
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(oh and thank you!)
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welcome sorry for the wait
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??...
You said try happy and love
what do you mean by that?
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you should put that in your poem
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It's GREAT

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Nothing thats awesome

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huh?

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Horses are like angles?

One word that comes to mind as a rhyme is, Dangles

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What??....
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Heeeeeeeeehhhhooooooooooeeee
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wow buddie, thats real nice of u to say
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It's the first line in the poem, read it, buddy
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yeah,
but u said try Dangles...?
oh and my last comment was on the dude (idk if u can see the comment, i repoted it) who said 'Heeeeeeeeehhhhooooooooooeeee"
not you.
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Ok
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just change some lines to make them clever and rhyming.

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